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Dec. 23rd, 2009
Ice, in The Neko Child
Dec. 23rd, 2009 11:42 pmMy temper is moderated somewhat by the fact I found this through google, although the second chapter author's note has since changed to remove any reference to me so I'm not sure how much credit I was actually given. Also by the fact it's just so weird to read.
See, someone's trying to change bits of the story to fit their new idea, so they're adding and removing things. What they add and remove give an idea of how they thought the original bits fit together, as if you're removing Thing A, you'll want to remove Explanation A that goes with it. Of course, if you aren't sure which bits match up to which, or even what Thing A is, exactly, and if it conflicts with Thing 1 you just added, the result is a stitched-together mess. But it gives me a good look at how they thought the story worked.
The Neko Child by Kari Suttle
A demon child was born and abandoned in the human realm, raised by a neglectful man. What will Koenma do when this demon child gets loose and starts killing humans at random? First fic, please review!
( I figure I can repost the whole thing here. I mean, it's mostly mine anyway. )
I've PMed them about this and haven't heard back yet, so I'm going to see how that goes. Please delay swarming them.
See, someone's trying to change bits of the story to fit their new idea, so they're adding and removing things. What they add and remove give an idea of how they thought the original bits fit together, as if you're removing Thing A, you'll want to remove Explanation A that goes with it. Of course, if you aren't sure which bits match up to which, or even what Thing A is, exactly, and if it conflicts with Thing 1 you just added, the result is a stitched-together mess. But it gives me a good look at how they thought the story worked.
The Neko Child by Kari Suttle
A demon child was born and abandoned in the human realm, raised by a neglectful man. What will Koenma do when this demon child gets loose and starts killing humans at random? First fic, please review!
( I figure I can repost the whole thing here. I mean, it's mostly mine anyway. )
I've PMed them about this and haven't heard back yet, so I'm going to see how that goes. Please delay swarming them.