Authors, Part One
Jan. 2nd, 2011 01:42 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
farlaAlready the replies are rolling in. As we see, there's once again an unstable connection between universes and we flip flop between bizarroverse and back.
You have received a reply from the author, Kuzosama, regarding the review you
posted for:
Title: Perspective
Chapter: 1
Story URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6598786/1/
Author URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/647404/
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Ooh, long review! Thanks for the great feedback and concrit. Will work on some
of that.
Yeah, funny thing. I shouldn't have uploaded it so fast, because I just
remembered that Red actually had a Potion in his bag. Argg!! Should've made
him use it. I suppose it's not too late to change it, but... Should I?
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Name: Kyogreperson
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2034044/
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Subject: re: Your review to Delete
A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/6613090/
If you don't like the way I write, then don't read.
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Title: It Was Never About The Bike
Chapter: 1
Story URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6614067/1/
Author URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2634161/
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Yes, people are still writing about Ash and Misty, get over it.
I'm sorry about all my grammatical mistakes, English isn't my first language,
and even though I speak it fluently, I'm still getting used to the grammar.
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You have received a reply from the author, lana banana, regarding the review
you posted for:
Title: Legends: The Kanto Chapters
Chapter: 1
Story URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6613036/1/
Author URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2304437/
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First of all, I really just want to thank you for being so honest with me.
That really is the kind of feedback I want, and I'm glad you took the time to
write it all out.
Yes, I know the title isn't the most poetic thing in the world. I thought
about something else, but I am doing a series and I wanted to make that clear.
If you really think something different would be a marked improvement, then
I'll keep that in mind. It was something I seriously thought about, and I went
with what felt right to me. It may not be the same for you, but it is what it
is. It's something for me to think about more, at the very least. (I am
impressed you took the time to look all of that up - makes me want to check
myself. xDD)
Yeah, I know it's not new. I'm certainly not saying it is. But my muse refuses
to let this project go, and I never aimed to break boundaries or stir up
controversy or something. I guess you could say I'm doing this, mostly, for
the outright fun of it, and to practice my writing. If other people read it
and enjoy it, great. If someone like you wants to give me some genuine concrit
on my actual writing and my decisions, even better. I need to be challenged. I
don't intend to render anyone speechless with the plot. I do, however, plan to
take some liberties with the game's canon - change things up. How that'll
actually turn out... I'll just have to see.
As for the beginning itself: trust me, I know it's not the most exciting thing
in the world. But I wanted some kind of groundwork, and this is what came. I
really don't have anything else to say about it - I didn't like it because
it's not the pace I'm used to, but my usual pacing wasn't going to work with
what I had to get across.
As for capitalization: you're referring to my capitalization of Oddish and
Rattata, I'm assuming? Well, I thought of it this way: I don't capitalize dog,
but if a two year-old actually names the dog Dog, then Dog - as its name -
will be capitalized. The Oddish and Rattata are referred to as though those
are their given names - Blue and Leaf certainly don't have the authority to
rename them. I'll give it another look and make sure I actually stuck to that
reasoning, though.
Like I said: I wanted some groundwork. I didn't intend for it to be the most
interesting or exciting thing in the world, but it gets everything else
started. I don't plan on writing every little bit out, trust me: I think I
would drive myself into giving this up entirely. My pace is normally at a
higher tempo than this chapter, but I wanted to make myself slow down and put
some effort into an actual beginning - and I wanted to make it something that
wasn't straight out of the games. It may not have turned out perfect, but
that's what reviewers like you are for.
And, again: thank you so much for going through the effort of writing your
review. You nailed pretty much all of my concerns (and made me think some
things through), and that's what I want when it comes to this thing. ^^
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You have received a reply from the author, chika12, regarding the review you
posted for:
Title: Brothers
Chapter: 1
Story URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6612525/1/
Author URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1978964/
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review Brothers :)
1) I'll agree with you on the grammer for "Dad's" but, i wrote weekend because
i was trying to reffer to the first weekend, as a starting point for all the
changes.
2) Sorry about the barley mix-up, I'm really bad at spellings and don't notice
it sometimes, ans since i apparently got the spelling for the grain right my
spell check dident catch it.
3) Well that's true, a lot of kids change, but here i meant back to when he
was happy, i guess that was not clear. My bad.
Well thanks once again and I hope to continue hearing more from you when
Brothers
is updated.
love
Chika
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You have received a reply from the author, Kuzosama, regarding the review you
posted for:
Title: Perspective
Chapter: 1
Story URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6598786/1/
Author URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/647404/
--------------------
Ooh, long review! Thanks for the great feedback and concrit. Will work on some
of that.
Yeah, funny thing. I shouldn't have uploaded it so fast, because I just
remembered that Red actually had a Potion in his bag. Argg!! Should've made
him use it. I suppose it's not too late to change it, but... Should I?
--------------------
Name: Kyogreperson
Profile: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2034044/
--------------------
Subject: re: Your review to Delete
A response to your review at http://www.fanfiction.net/r/6613090/
If you don't like the way I write, then don't read.
--------------------
Title: It Was Never About The Bike
Chapter: 1
Story URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6614067/1/
Author URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2634161/
--------------------
Yes, people are still writing about Ash and Misty, get over it.
I'm sorry about all my grammatical mistakes, English isn't my first language,
and even though I speak it fluently, I'm still getting used to the grammar.
--------------------
You have received a reply from the author, lana banana, regarding the review
you posted for:
Title: Legends: The Kanto Chapters
Chapter: 1
Story URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6613036/1/
Author URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2304437/
--------------------
First of all, I really just want to thank you for being so honest with me.
That really is the kind of feedback I want, and I'm glad you took the time to
write it all out.
Yes, I know the title isn't the most poetic thing in the world. I thought
about something else, but I am doing a series and I wanted to make that clear.
If you really think something different would be a marked improvement, then
I'll keep that in mind. It was something I seriously thought about, and I went
with what felt right to me. It may not be the same for you, but it is what it
is. It's something for me to think about more, at the very least. (I am
impressed you took the time to look all of that up - makes me want to check
myself. xDD)
Yeah, I know it's not new. I'm certainly not saying it is. But my muse refuses
to let this project go, and I never aimed to break boundaries or stir up
controversy or something. I guess you could say I'm doing this, mostly, for
the outright fun of it, and to practice my writing. If other people read it
and enjoy it, great. If someone like you wants to give me some genuine concrit
on my actual writing and my decisions, even better. I need to be challenged. I
don't intend to render anyone speechless with the plot. I do, however, plan to
take some liberties with the game's canon - change things up. How that'll
actually turn out... I'll just have to see.
As for the beginning itself: trust me, I know it's not the most exciting thing
in the world. But I wanted some kind of groundwork, and this is what came. I
really don't have anything else to say about it - I didn't like it because
it's not the pace I'm used to, but my usual pacing wasn't going to work with
what I had to get across.
As for capitalization: you're referring to my capitalization of Oddish and
Rattata, I'm assuming? Well, I thought of it this way: I don't capitalize dog,
but if a two year-old actually names the dog Dog, then Dog - as its name -
will be capitalized. The Oddish and Rattata are referred to as though those
are their given names - Blue and Leaf certainly don't have the authority to
rename them. I'll give it another look and make sure I actually stuck to that
reasoning, though.
Like I said: I wanted some groundwork. I didn't intend for it to be the most
interesting or exciting thing in the world, but it gets everything else
started. I don't plan on writing every little bit out, trust me: I think I
would drive myself into giving this up entirely. My pace is normally at a
higher tempo than this chapter, but I wanted to make myself slow down and put
some effort into an actual beginning - and I wanted to make it something that
wasn't straight out of the games. It may not have turned out perfect, but
that's what reviewers like you are for.
And, again: thank you so much for going through the effort of writing your
review. You nailed pretty much all of my concerns (and made me think some
things through), and that's what I want when it comes to this thing. ^^
--------------------
You have received a reply from the author, chika12, regarding the review you
posted for:
Title: Brothers
Chapter: 1
Story URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6612525/1/
Author URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1978964/
--------------------
Thank you for taking the time to read and review Brothers :)
1) I'll agree with you on the grammer for "Dad's" but, i wrote weekend because
i was trying to reffer to the first weekend, as a starting point for all the
changes.
2) Sorry about the barley mix-up, I'm really bad at spellings and don't notice
it sometimes, ans since i apparently got the spelling for the grain right my
spell check dident catch it.
3) Well that's true, a lot of kids change, but here i meant back to when he
was happy, i guess that was not clear. My bad.
Well thanks once again and I hope to continue hearing more from you when
Brothers
is updated.
love
Chika
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