self control i has it

[farla]

The more I think about this the more I actually want to do it.

Is there any good repository of different fan sburb games I could use to get a baseline?

Comments

Re: -Exciting!

[farla.livejournal.com]

It's probably part of that thing where the less someone knows what they're doing, the more confident they are. Right when I finished NaRe someone asked me to review their story because it's their first serious attempt at fanfic, want to do a good job, etc etc. I glanced at it and they hit pretty much every grammar error I list in my reviews.

Still, you could always go for the cursory review of the first chapter and then say X just isn't your thing.

Re: -Exciting!

[ember-reignited.livejournal.com]

I ended up bluntly telling them that it was pretty much unreadable and I could only stomach so much of it, then skimming some later chapters and finding a few things they did right-ish to compliment them on.