farla

Story: Outside the Box Failures
Chapter: 1. Chapter 1

From: A-arbor ( http://www.fanfiction.net/u/4341472/ )
Reply URL: https://www.fanfiction.net/pm2/post.php?rwid=170544694
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This is it? Really? And you complained about my story being, quote unquote,
"an unreadable mess." It's not that this story was unreadable, don't get me
wrong. But it was short as hell and, to be honest, YOUR grammar needs a touch
up. Besides, I can't understand what's happening. Who died? What happened to
Madoka? You need to make this longer, add more detail or AT LEAST make an
extra chapter. If this is you old stuff and it makes you less mad if I'm being
mean about it then good. I'll at least get the satisfaction that you were once
like us and didn't think yourself above everyone else with your "grammar
guide." And if this is counted as spam, no it is not. I am just stating what I
think and how you can improve, sort of.

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