Wait, spoke too soon
Dec. 17th, 2008 03:51 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
farlaJust gave a handful of reviews and it seems the stupid has returned. I guess that's what I get for leaving so many stories unreviewed for a while. Still nothing particularly bitchy, though. Just:
Well, thanks for the review!
To start off, pokemon actually do need a capital letter.
That second bit, I don't really understand what you mean. Who's speech are
you referring to? I've reread the story and I can't see what you're talking
about.
'Seriously, pick up a book or something, this is basic, basic stuff.'
Okay, that was really rude.
I'm sorry about the stuff in brackets. I just didn't want people to read that
line and wonder what the heck I was going on about when she mentioned the
'Creative' fiasco. I apologise if it took away from your enjoyment of the
story.
Jade is actually a shade of green...
Yes, orbs are eyes. Very observant!
I had used 'eyes' previously in the sentence, so I didn't want repetition.
I didn't instantly post the story after I'd written it. Believe it or not, I
went over it many times to check I was happy with it.
I don't suppose you have any comments about the story itself, or indeed
anything to say that's even remotely friendly? It's nice to have a little
recognition of what I did well instead of a review focusing on negative
things.
I appreciate your review, and I hope you reply answering my query about the
dialogue!
ArcanineOod xX
^_^
Note: they are a beta reader. "Grammar and spelling are my best areas, and also sentence structure. I'm very spelling and grammar minded, so I guess that's where I excel in beta-reading."
Fucking FFN.
Well, thanks for the review!
To start off, pokemon actually do need a capital letter.
That second bit, I don't really understand what you mean. Who's speech are
you referring to? I've reread the story and I can't see what you're talking
about.
'Seriously, pick up a book or something, this is basic, basic stuff.'
Okay, that was really rude.
I'm sorry about the stuff in brackets. I just didn't want people to read that
line and wonder what the heck I was going on about when she mentioned the
'Creative' fiasco. I apologise if it took away from your enjoyment of the
story.
Jade is actually a shade of green...
Yes, orbs are eyes. Very observant!
I had used 'eyes' previously in the sentence, so I didn't want repetition.
I didn't instantly post the story after I'd written it. Believe it or not, I
went over it many times to check I was happy with it.
I don't suppose you have any comments about the story itself, or indeed
anything to say that's even remotely friendly? It's nice to have a little
recognition of what I did well instead of a review focusing on negative
things.
I appreciate your review, and I hope you reply answering my query about the
dialogue!
ArcanineOod xX
^_^
Note: they are a beta reader. "Grammar and spelling are my best areas, and also sentence structure. I'm very spelling and grammar minded, so I guess that's where I excel in beta-reading."
Fucking FFN.
Thank you
Date: 2008-12-23 11:08 pm (UTC)When I wrote that, I wasn't sure if it was correct. Thanks for pointing it out to me!
I just hope next time, you could answer me the day I ask the question, not the day I find you're bashing me in your blog.
Once again, thank you very much!
ArcanineOod xX =]